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This week we had to write a story and make an animal. Combining animals. My animal was a cheetah head with a cheetah body and a giraffe tale. And we had to write a story about it and it needed to include characters. And say what they were doing. And first we had to create our characters and plan the story on whats going to happen. And then on tuesday.
We started writing our real story then on wednesday. We had to write 3 paragraphs. Then on Thursday we had to copy it and put it on a Google Docs. And edit it to find any Mistakes that you did or if you wanted to change up the story. Just in case and then once we finished we had to read for any mistakes. And then on friday we had to blog it. So here is the Link for you to read. Hope you enjoy. And if I missed any thing please comment.
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Talofa Dustine. You have been very busy this week planning your narrative about your cheetah. If you give him a name instead of ‘ he’ it will be a stronger story. How did his giraffe tail help? He was very skilled to catch a fish with his sharp teeth when he probably didn’t like water. Well done to write 3 paragraphs. Would another morphed animal been a help to the cheetah?
ReplyDeleteThanks for sharing your great blog, Dusty. Have an enjoyable family weekend. Keep smiling.
Hi Dusty,
ReplyDeleteYou have worked very hard on your story and followed the instructions too. I especially liked paragraph two. It was well constructed with different sentence beginnings. Keep up the good work.
From Mrs Mackenzie 😎